MARTYRSTORYBOARD

Mirror Room (symbolizing different dimensions) 

Internal self, breaking, fracturing, transforming. Whatever happens outside reflects here:

Desert Planet  (the switching realities) 

 This world represents how others perceive you, the monster or the martyr

Me and Lexie battle physically and spiritually.

Martyr (Monster) unfolds across two parallel spaces: the desert Planet and the Mirror room, where M and Lexie are both after the Fraction Code.

Fraction code The Fraction Code chooses which version of a person becomes real. Martyr or monster, it depends entirely on which emotion dominates and whose perspective defines the moment.

The Mirror Room, where M's identity fractures as alternate timelines try to push their way, to take over.

Each character carries a compass, a symbolic device pointing to their own moral and emotional trajectory.

As M and Lexie fight, the compasses drift in conflicting directions, reflecting their opposing interpretations of the Fraction Code.

Every time M's actions align with the darker “monster” timeline, it cuts to the mirror room, where black liquid starts overtaking each part of her body, and on the desert planet,  she coughs up black fabric, the physical manifestation of a possible future trying to assert itself into the present.

In the Mirror Room, M  confronts multiple reflections of herself, each representing a different timeline. The band members appear only in reflections (We'll film jamie playing drums there too), as if they exist in parallel layers of the hologram.

Alex is the only one that is seen in the same room, not in a reflection, but his figure is transparent, so when M tried to reach out, her hand goes right through him, like he's a ghost. He symbolizes a remnant of an unrealized timeline.

We show his silhouette transparent first part of the song, only when the solo comes in, that he is fully revealed on the dessert Planet. Also, he can control the time with his playing, when the solo starts, M and Lexie are battling, but the time disturbances caused by Alex are destabilizing all possible outcomes, the fight goes from slow motion, to fast, to erratic, when Dave's solo comes in, M and Lexie realize that they have to merge (so the monster and martyr are one).

 During the climax, the staff is knocked from M’s and Lexie’s hands. Then, they grab it simultaneously, overpowering each other until the struggle forces them into a moment of connection. Feeling each other's energy, they realize they are both monster and martyr, two sides of the same fractured truth, shaped only by perspective. The compass suddenly stops and picks a direction (picking which timeline will come into reality) as they stop fighting.

In the final moments, the alternate reflections fade, and the keyboard-player echo dissolves in the mirror room and only shows him in the desert planet. The timeline stabilizes, revealing a single reality where the monster and the martyr are within the same person, shaped not by fear, but by perspective, and that is enough to realize we can shape our timelines by choices. 

ENDING OF THE INSTRUMENTAL VERSION (WITH A TWIST)  The video ended as though everything was resolved, but after the instrumental song/video plays out, where I'll be using mostly performance footage, at the end  

ONE OF THE TIMELINES SURVIVES ANYWAY The Mirror Room turns red, it's the SHADOW-VERSION OF M,

 THE MONSTER TIMELINE THAT WASN’T CHOSEN. And it’s been watching. The eyes are red, veins are black, blackness  overtaking the body Right before the cut to black, Alex appears, not transparent anymore, but in full, holding the compass.Meaning: the monster version of M wasn’t destroyed it was suppressed it is still conscious and it will look for another moment to break through into reality. This suggests that  Monster and martyr are not opposites but  go through cycles. And timelines never truly die.

🎥DAY 1 — DESERT PLANET

(MAIN FIGHT + PERFORMANCE + TIMELINE DISTORTIONS)

1. Establishing Shots

1.1 Wide shot: vast desert planet landscape
1.2 Detail shots: sand, rocks, alien textures
1.3 M walking toward camera, holding the Compass 
1.4 Lexie standing opposite, compass in hand 

Alex figure in the distance 

2. Get PERFORMANCE shots out of the way 

Solo shots of M, Doug, Alex, Kenny 

Group shots where M, Kenny, Doug are spread out and camera moves from one to another 

3. Compasses / Tension Setup some camera, some drone shots

2.1 Close-up: M’s compass drifting erratically
2.2 Close-up: Lexie’s compass pointing opposite
2.3 M and Lexie see each other in the distance, M is closer to the camera, Lexie in the distance, (some over the shoulder angle shots)
2.4 Both characters eyeing each other

3. Fight SCENE 

Multiple takes of the fight scene, slow motion with camera and regular with Drone. Some slow motion shot of perspective from M and perspective from Lexie 

3. End of  Fight Scene

1. Staff gets knocked out from one of them 

2.Some Close up of them falling to the ground and grasping one staff 

3. Wide shot of them both on the knees holding one staff 

4.Same shot this time with Alex in the background (he'll be glitching in and out of the frame) 

5.2 Quick shots: stances, footwork, close-ups of faces

6. compass falls to the ground

4. Black Fabric Moments

1. M coughs up a  strip of black fabric in the middle of the fight 
2. Shot of the Fabric in sand

3.Shot of compass on in the sand 
4. Close up of Lexie's face as she reacts with worry, sees “the monster timeline” trying to surface

5. Time Disturbances Triggered by Alex (Solo Section Begins)

5. Alex camera and Drone shots of him playing the keyboard (we can either do it with the rest of the band's performance footage or maybe do this in a slightly different part of the location) 

Alex walking through the landscape away from the camera 

Alex picking up the compass 


6. Realization Moment

8.1  close-ups: M + Lexie’s eyes as they feel each other's energy

DAY 2 — MIRROR ROOM (REALITY FRACTURE + BAND REFLECTIONS + ECHO OF ALEX + TWIST)

1. Establishing Mirror Room

1.1 Clean mirror room, white or silver
1.2 M sing though in the middle 

Performance of Jamie, Kenny, Dave, Doug. Not Alex, Alex only plays the keyboard in the desert, cause he's controlling the timelines from there 

In the mirror room, Alex is only the transparent figure that M can't touch. 

2. Growing Corruption

1 M looks in mirror — black liquid spreads slightly starting with her hand
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2. Mirrors show different timeline versions of M (subtle changes of wardrobe and acting)

3. Band Members in Reflection

3.1 Jamie drumming in reflection ONLY
3.2 Guitar and bass reflections appear in separate panels
3.3 None exist in the physical room

4. Alex Echo Shots

4.1 Transparent Alex next to M (we'll have to do split camera shots again, same shot of M and Alex, and same shot of just M. 
4.2 M reaches out — hand passes through echo
4.3 Alex flickers and disappears

5. Fabric Manifestation (this will cut to when the fabric is coghed up by M in the desrt)

5.1 Close-ups: black fabric falling from M’s hand in mirror
5.2 Fabric dissipates before touching ground
5.Try to catch reflections of the band members 


6. During Guitar SoloS (Mirror–Desert Sync)

If we can film just the reflection of them just for some effects. 

Ending for the INSTRUMENTAL VERSION TWIST 

1. Mirror Room turnes red the other timeline overtakes


2. Shadow-M Version Appears

1 Monster-version M stands in mirror, black veins, red eyes, 
2 This M is calm, aware, watching

3. Alex figure fully manifests 

1.picks up a compass


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